Friday, 8 May 2015

Tuck shop - Persuasive writing

My focus in writing was to start writing in paragraphs. My next learning is to give more information when I am writing in paragraphs. Reon

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  1. Hi Reon ,

    Zeba and I like how well you had organized your writing . You really pointed out the good stuff about the tuckshop. We think you wrote well in paragraphs and that you are now confident in this style of writing.

    From Zeba and Shantay.

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  2. Hi room 6, It's cool that your learning about writing paragraphs. Keep writing paragraphs and give better information.

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